From
the feedback that we gathered from our audience in the initial stages of
production, we found that the majority of people liked the slow motion effect
on the shots that was used. They felt that it was visually very effective and
also fitted in well with the chosen genre and the slow tempo of the song. As
this feedback was collected in the very early stages of productions, we
had many criticisms made and we used this to improve. Some criticisms include
shots that felt that they were out of place or just didn’t fit in with the
music video.
Audience
feedback
Positive
feedback
·
Good lipsyncing
·
Narrative matches
with slow lyrics
·
Good contrast
between Black and white and the colour shots
Negative
feedback
·
Opening too dark
·
Shaky scenes
·
Lighting too dark
in the bedroom
·
Shot that is way
too shaky – get rid of it!
·
Unfinished
What we shall do to
improve
·
Work on the
lighting in the post production, if this does not work we shall re film scenes
·
We shall get rid
of the shaky scenes and replace them with stable scenes
·
We shall complete
the music video taking into consideration the criticisms given
Audience feedback
Positive
·
Great mise en scene
·
Good lighting in shots
·
The narrative is clearer than before
·
Effects work well
·
Good use of fade to black at the end
Negative
·
Strange bathroom shot
·
Bad sound quality
·
Out of sync piano shots
Improvements
·
We shall cut out the bathroom shot
·
Re sync the piano shots extending them or
cutting them to make sure they are in sync and that it doesn’t affect the rest
of the video
·
Replace the sound to a higher quality
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